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Crimson Tears

crimson tears flow down my face
through the crack where; my heart was once placed
now through it shines shattered bone
and sounds of heart broken groans
shattered with I love you lies
with string and needle, my chest I sew closed
for never again will, I love you flow
too much heart break has filled me with fear
not knowing who to trust, or who to hold near
feeling that tender touch pulling me close
but fears pains rears, and pushes me away
words press to be free
in the past, they cost me so dear
now all that’s left is pain and fear
of life’s abuse from letting some one near
left with this deep dark hole
a void of hurt; fearing none will ever hold
my heart no longer works
sorry my love, one of my life’s many pains
for deep in my eyes you see a sparkle of love
but also a puddle of tears
placed there by past pains and my fears

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  • Angels Whispers gold member
    August 21
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    so sad.

    Love,your writes are showing such sadness within.It sounds like august is not a good month for you ,because of past happenings.July was the same for me,it is when my mother was taken from us,I guess thats why I also have been really down in the dumps.
    It is good though that you can release some of those pent up emotions by writting about them, I found this to be good therapy for myself.Your poem is so well written that it enables the reader to see your story and to also feel what you have written.My heart goes out to you in this time of sadness and fear, always remember that you have here on AP many friends who love and care about you, but more so importantly..understands that you are going through a bad time at the moment,and we are here for you.
    Much love to you.
    ~Angel~

  • ckwriter69 silver member
    August 12

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    Very good write Teresa, you have a brilliant way of bringing out sad and tearful writes. This expresses a lot of pain and sorrow. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and hold your head high.


  • Mistress Rose
    August 10

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    WOW... your title caught my eye but your word caught my interest, the struggle of loving and fearing due to lies and heartbreak I know it all to well. Afraid to love, fearing the pain and knowing all to well the emotional ache fo the heart. I was lucky I had patrick there for me during me extreme time of heartbreak. I hope things can shine alittle brighter for you with time unfortunitly that time may seem forever but will be well worth it.


    • Tears of Roses
      August 10
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      Of late seems things are getting over whamming.
      They weight very heavy on my mind.
      Thank you so much Rose
      Roses to you

      Teresa

  • Disturbed Prodigy gold member
    August 9

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    You poems are getting more and more sorrow filled, my friend are you okay? tell me when you can keep it flowing
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