Globe's six twirls
around nova,
gently shaking day's love
to fill in passionate nights,
since heart pounded loud
as lips wedded you in my life.
From tiffs to kisses
moon stood witness each night;
heart feels each day
oceans of love splashing,
no soul in all worlds
can ever feel more,
next day,
astonishment dawns,
for a person loves even more~
ME.
As sun rose today,
I feel
thoughts dipped in affection
pouring from your eyes,
right into my soul
sealed lips
speak so much.
Author notes
My anniversary and Bday today
A very very Happy anniversary to you Hubby!
A contest entry
- Marry Me? by luna-midnight.
1000 points, ended August 18, 2008, 20 entries
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aww wow this is just beautiful and amazing *hugs*
thanks for enterign and good luck
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Awww! This is so sweet and touching. I am sure he will love it. Happy anniversary sis. I really loved the imagery and metaphores in this. Very well done!
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Thankies!!!!
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Your in love LOL Very good. I hope he takes you out
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Will be going out in evening..he wanted to take me out to lunch, but way too hot..so I postponed it to dinner...
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Made me smile...
A perfect write for such a special occasion! My best wishes to you for continued love and happiness. 
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Thank you so much!
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