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Disaster

Something's hiding in the shadows
creeping up behind the one remaining
survivors' guilty souls.
I may need some therapy
while this world rapes me
listening to the clothes tear,
makes me clench my heart like my fist.
Then raise it in the air,
proudly waving it like a flag.
Still beating, I offer it to you.
On a plate with catsup on the side,
you lean in with your steak knife.
Now I can say that I can,
make my own disaster.
It will not make the time go by faster,
because eternity seems to last forever.



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  • jscribbled
    August 8, 2008
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    whew, nice.

    I may need some therapy
    while this world rapes me

    great word choice


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 8, 2008
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    very strong language, hope ur okay?
    keep writting and take care
    Stephanie


  • darkheart76
    August 8, 2008
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    GREAT

    LOVED IT


    • TrulyLoothy
      August 8, 2008
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      thank you, speaking of disaster i have a bad feeling about November 11th of this year. My predictions have never been wrong.