It seemed so easy before,
when we were just friends.
But then when you found out i loved you,
nothing has been the same.
I know that you don't love me that way,
but I really can't help the way that I feel.
I just want to know if you know the pain it causes me,
Every time I see you with her.
I know that I will always be the friend,
But I still cannot stop loving you.
So even though I feel this way,
and you do not feel the same,
my heart will shatter even more,
because unrequitted love seems the only thing.
Author notes
not my best....
A contest entry
- Unrequited emotions. by Lights Sorrow.
600 points, ended August 26, 2008, 11 entries
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Hey Cerbie! Been a while...
I agree this isn't your best...but something about it...I felt your heart in this...I really did. I can relate...I know what it feels like to love something with all your being...and not have it returned the same...yeah, I'll always be her friend...but it kills me that she should be with me and she can't.
"But I still cannot stop loving you.
So even though I feel this way,
and you do not feel the same,
my heart will shatter even more,
because unrequitted love seems the only thing."
This is true...I feel the same way...I'm gonna keep loving her even if it kills me...
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Very good.
Though you say it isn't your best I did like the feeling behind it. You really took in the meaning of an unrequited emotion and displayed it in beautiful words. Keep up the great work. -
it was very good. good luck in the contest
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I have been there before, many of moons ago! I really enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest. Please do not be so hard on yourself, for this is not the worst poem I have read by far. I, in fact did like this. In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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I have been there before, many of moons ago! I really enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest. Please do not be so hard on yourself, for this is not the worst poem I have read by far. I, in fact did like this. In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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