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Real Men

Real men need labels
To help women weed jerks out!

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TEN words and ten words ONLY

A contest entry

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  • Roland Welles gold member
    November 12

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    Lol... You convey very much in so little... Well done!!!


    • Jet City Woman
      November 12

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      Thank you! Hm, you have a tattoo. Is that S on your hand for "stay away"? I'm teasing!!

      xoxo
      KJ

      • Roland Welles gold member
        November 12
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        LMAO... It's not a tattoo... Just put it on there with a marker for somone... Hmmmmm... Actually, I guess you could say yes, it means "stay away"... I belong to "S"....

  • Jet City Woman
    December 7, 2008
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    Hi Rick, thank you! I forgot about this poem! (Is 10 words really a poem?) Yes, some men should have labels, or maybe tattoos saying "Stay away!"

    xoxo
    KJ


  • Endeavor gold member
    November 20, 2008
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    Very Good


    That is a great idea
    Put it on their pockets

    lol

    Rick

  • dillpickle62
    August 14, 2008

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    Hahaha...

    I have threatened in the past to find a school that would teach me how to be a jerk. It has appeared in my experiance that it's the jerks who actually get the full time woman who stay longer. I'm too nice, to understanding, I think? haha.... Oh... well... I know no other way.
    Best wishes in the contest.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 9, 2008

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    Well if it was a real man, we wouldn't have to worry about them being jerks---- MUCH!

    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm


    • Jet City Woman
      August 9, 2008
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      Much! LOL Ok, you're right! I'm sure all men have a level of jerkiness in their blood!

  • She Stole My Voice
    August 9, 2008

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    Amen to that sister.
    They can be such schmucks!
    haha.
    Good luck in the contest :]
    ♥


    ~Princess of Shadows~


    • Jet City Woman
      August 9, 2008
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      Thank you! Schmucks, funny! I used to have a shirt in the 1980's that said, "I'm OK, you're a schmuck!"


  • ennovy silver member
    August 9, 2008

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    Well I know what you mean
    cause there's some real
    jerks out there...novy

    Smiling!

    • Jet City Woman
      August 9, 2008
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      One less in my life: booted the jerk! Hoo-rah! That's what Army guys yell, right? LOL I think one of the services yell that.


  • Sorcha
    August 8, 2008

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    Excellent!

    *laughs* I love it! You certainly caught my attention with this one. And while an unfortunate statement, it can certainly have its moments of truth (although it would be unfair and remiss to not admit that many women are in need of labels of their own).


    • Jet City Woman
      August 9, 2008
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      Yes, ok, I agree. Women can be, uh, jerks too! But hey, I only had 10 words to work with!


  • intanglio2ring
    August 8, 2008

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    And how does your label read?
    Oooo!
    (puts arms up to protect from flying stilletto)
    Good Luck in the contest
    Tang

    • Jet City Woman
      August 9, 2008
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      A lady doesn't use her shoes as weapons, I assure you! She uses her ex-husband's combat boots that he left behind!

      Thank you!

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