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The Words You Say

The reason I think of you everyday,
is because I linger on words you say

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there are 17 words, is that ok?

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  • MortalPhoenix
    August 8, 2008

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    I like this. There are many directions in which a poem inspired by this could go.

    I really did want it to be just 15 words, though. I can see a few ways to modify it to make it 15, please try. But if you can't I'll still accept it.

    Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!