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I Need My Scissors

Raw tastes on my tongue trigger my senses
The taste of titanium silver touching the smooth
Muscle known as my tongue

Don’t be alarmed when the flesh begins to bleed
Don’t look at me in disbelief; I’m in a straight jacket aren’t I?
It matches with my heart, bound and restrained from movement or the slightest bit of improvement. It’s in a state of containment, because my heart and I are so destructive.

Then I hear the rhythmic beat of the blade sinking in with the beating of my heart
Eyes closed, but still knowing what’s going on. Bleeding profusely, but still knowing I can’t stop.

Small motions of my body, telling me I’m in pain
Ignoring, I don’t need it anymore

I don’t need the pain; I don’t need you or anyone else

All I need are my scissors to help pass the time

Author notes

http://mais2.deviantart.com/art/I-D0NT-NiD-iT-ANyM0RE-40806198

i was inpsired by this picture. which i thought was a very interesting picture i like it a lot.

I don't think this is very good, but i like the topic.

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  • peregrin
    August 9, 2008
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    Great work!
    I really like this piece,
    it is well written!
    Good luck!


  • playin with scissor
    August 8, 2008
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    its great babe


  • Sick Sunshine
    August 8, 2008

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    "It matches with my heart, bound and restrained"
    I really enjoyed reading this poem.
    I too absolutely just love the picture.
    your poem put the image in place.