Another time, another place,
that's what I think,
when we are face to face.
I feel so comfortable with you,
no wrong can we do.
You seem to know,
what I want to say,
there aren't many.
girls, who affect me,
this way.
You look at me,
with your heavenly eyes,
there is no way,
I could lie.
I love you, I think,
you know.
No further allowed to go,
We are both married,
and that's the way it,
will stay.
Remaining friends,till
our dying day.
Still I do love you,
honestly I do.
It would break my heart,
to loose you.
One more thing I have,
to say,
I love you as a friend,
and that's till the end.
A contest entry
- Tell someone you love them... by Margaret Denham.
1900 points, ended August 23, 2008, 47 entries
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Comments
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Sometimes the love of friends can travel a fine line. I could feel your emotions within your words.
Thank you for entering and best wishes in the judging.
Margaret
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Thank you for your comments,yes it is a fine line.You have to be carefull not to cross,or risk the loss of the friendship. Carl.
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Oh thats a twist!
I like this a lot. I really do keep up the good poetry! -
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Thank you the poem is about my muse, a good friend, who some times I wish was more. once again many thanks Carl.
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