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Scream Bloody Hell!!

Just before the fretboard, after players play their parts,
slightly after arrogance; before the tuning starts,
I hold inside my body all the rage of lying men,
I hold inside my soul the battle I will fight again.

Just before the amplifier, and before the chord,
I try to be the satisfier for the bloody sword.
Down into the bottom of the cask of bitter wine
I dip into the melody until I'm feeling fine.

I scream through strings of bronze and steel
with fingers caught by life;
I weep for all the things I feel
and work out all my strife.

At last, my lips are sealed again,
my hands have found their place;
I lay them softly there and then
I brighten up my face.

The scream has turned to lullaby,
the rage has turned to dance;
once more I don't have to cry,
I've changed my circumstance.

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Derived from the following picture prompt:
http://vidi.deviantart.com/art/scream-11721165

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  • Sick Sunshine
    August 8, 2008

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    jaw dropping poem!

    I am IN LOVE with how you changed the image using just words..and used them well you did. Your poem fits like a glove to the image. Good luck in my contest =]