Offering my heart
upon fuchsia sleeves,
wrapped in
alabaster lotus petals;
you dropped them
one by one to the floor,
"he loves me,
he loves me not"
~I never knew.
Author notes
Offering by by Stephane De Bourgies found at www.art.com
mysticstorm
Amaranthine Lover
A contest entry
- Best Prewrites From August 2008 by amaranthine lover.
2450 points, ended October 8, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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and I love this. Not question about it.
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So Delicate
Such a beautiful poem. It is so soft with beautiful imagery. This was a real pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing with me your gift to write poetry.
Many Blessings
Much Love Always
Kelle Marie
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OMG
this is powerful in message and even more impressive within the brevity...
VERY WELL DONE!
I love the final line too..."I never knew"
been there...done that...and it sucked...
I adore the angle your Muse took...
Thank you for sharing your time and talent with me!
I am honored to find your ink in my contest!
Blessings! Tammy
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It is the knowing or not that sounds the bells that toll. Strong feeling and imagery sweetheart.
Love,
Mouser -
thats so awesome! i loved it. a short but brilliant piece. i could visualize it all as i was reading. and well i love it
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TOUCHING!!!!!
Your words truly get one to stop and think!
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simply stunning emotion and imagery, packs a powerful punch in so few words and leaves me walking away with a huge sigh, great write - you will be dearly missed.
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