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Acceptation

A boy,
With is head raised,
Curses the sky
Wondering why God has taken away his loved ones.

He wonders what the meaning of life is,
When all he has in his heart is pain.

The tears, like a raging storm,
Erupts from his soul.

The pain envelops him,
He curses life
And questions faith.

He says laughing,
“God Grace ha!, what is left of me but a hollow shell?”

He stands over his father’s casket
Wishing that he never left.

That’s the start of sin.

He forgets The Lord
And walks his path alone

He does the wrong things for the wrong reasons.
He loses faith and hates life.

The Devil rides his back,
And makes his choices for him.

And at a young age he gets saved.
But he still questions The Lord.

Why does he pretend to believe,
When all that he feels is sorrow?

Why does he pretend to love God.
When so much has gone wrong?

Then one night, as if he was struck,
The tears flooded his eyes,
As he crashed to his knees.


He raises his hands to the sky
And he smiles saying:
“Lord, I love you!”

Then the Man stands to his feet.
With his cheeks, stained with tears,
He looks towards the sky
And forgets all of his fears

my religous experiance

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    August 10, 2008

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    wow!

    Dude, this is such a strong write! it was so powerful and filled with emotions (i just cant expplain with words) this is so beautiful and there's a message behing your words! i'm glad you haven't lost faith in god! keep the faith alive, and you'll go strong! ooh, and don't hate life, its too short, so live it well!

    ~RANJI