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Whispers Of Souls

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Can you hear my heart beat
its whispering your name
No other can feel my heat
you’re the beginning and end
.....Of my loves chain.

Hollow once was my soul
but you came to me with light
My words started to overflow
with so much love and insight
…Our love remains

Within my eyes your visions lay
and in my soul we are entwined
Hands of passion forever play
as we get lost in a love confined
....Where love entertains

You grace me with your presence
and I fall in passions flames
Nature brings our loves essence
when you whisper I can’t refrain
…As you say my name

Author notes

Again I would like to thank Timothy for yet another precious write that has touched my soul

Indeed these days I seem to cross lines I shouldnt and I am sick and tired of it. Tired of being ....who knows what.

 

This peice as all others was written with love and compassion. This is a piece of two poets who love to pen together, and I feel he deserves recognition, for he is a definate top notch poet and worthy of being such.

 

If anyone feels that his pieces are not warming to their hearts as they usually are look towards me. He puts it all in everything he does, and I am honored when he pens with me. I am a poet in training. Therefore may hold one back.

 

If so I am sorry .

 

 

Please recognise this poet and read him, he ie very worthy of it.

 

http://allpoetry.com/poeticweaver

 

 

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  • kooleyes
    October 18, 2008

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    This is beautifully written. your words are full of a sweet emotion called love. Nicely penned. Thanks for the read and keep on writing


  • notyetfree
    October 5, 2008
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    An awesome write!! You are truly talented!!!


  • Swan song gold member
    September 12, 2008
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    aS YOU SAY MY NAME! I love that! This poem is a romantic treat!


  • The Drifter
    September 10, 2008

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    This poem is moving and inpiring.. Very well Written and a good read.
    You two write well together.
    bw


  • Swan song gold member
    August 23, 2008
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    Well one of these days I may be able to breathe after reading your work lol

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    August 18, 2008
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  • Commonsuicide
    August 17, 2008
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    love it


  • Riamh
    August 14, 2008

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    That is a beautiful poem that reads excellently aloud. Well written. A pleasure to read. Thank you.
    Slayer


  • moluv10
    August 13, 2008

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    This is a great blending of two pasionate, poetic minds. I throughly enjoyed it. Keep writing, both of you.


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    August 11, 2008

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    Very beautiful Indeed.
    Image, rhythm and rhyme Are just graceful.
    A very lovely and passionat piece you have here.
    Great job job.
    -Mandi


  • Amera gold member
    August 11, 2008

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    Yes, I can feel your heart beat in this lovely and passionate poem. This is rich and graceful. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    August 10, 2008

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    Superb

    Ah, 'tis a fine write indeed. Image, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. I liked the hint of sensuality this poem contains without being offensive. Once again, well done.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 9, 2008

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    Beautiful You Pen Always Sweet Soul!

    Thanks for sharing your heart with my own as we share this poetic stage of whispering souls that mend broken hearts whole once anew every time we pen love tender true. Even through the blue, we try and shine. Thanks again Victorious!

    Love ya lots, Timothy


  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 8, 2008
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    outstanding!

    The two of you should take a well deserved bow for this perfect pairing of talented pens!


  • Shadow Lynx
    August 8, 2008

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    Great layout and sensual feel and a very good joint effort. A good depth of feeling and devotion is created ampongst well chsoen words. Great write !


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    You two write so well together, and spark each others best work. The piece here is no exception, great work both of you.



    Jeff


  • Volfeng
    August 8, 2008

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    Excellent write you two, as always, no apologies are necessary of any sort, my Love

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