Breathless Beauty of Ambiguity
Restless Interpretation
Evolving In A Land Far Away
Accepting Of The World's Hidden Invitation
Twisting and Turning Through Two Live's Tales
Heeding The Narrow Minds Blissed By An Ignorant Spell
Leaving Behind The Reality of Broken Communication
Examining The Peace And Tranquility Of Non-Conformity
Seizing The Mountain Top of Magnificent World Beauty
Succumbing To The Things I Cannot Change
Bold to the Unknown
Encompassing The Overgrown
Alleviating The Wind of Change
Utilizing The Things In Range
Tainted By Feet Off The Ground
Yearning For Some Solid Sound
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WOW
This really brings upon one to think deeply. A very thought provoking poem. You are just darling and the depth and beauty in this poem if just wonderful. I love the imagery and emotions you expressed here in this excellent poem. Thank you Lauren for sharing with me your gift to write poetry..
Wishing You Many Blessings
Much Love Always
Kelle Marie


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I am so proud of you
you totally amaze me, your smart, charming, you have a beautiful heart and soul, you see things in depth and touch the simple things, your like the cool evening breeze flowing through the leaves on the trees, just beautiful.
Ain't nothin shakin but the leaves on the trees....


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Breathless Beauty
You penned some beautiful thoughts powered I feel with attitude of personal confidence .... a self examination in thought is what i have been doing ... thinking of how i feel to your lines and this is good in a poem to make your reader think.
Thank you for this journey.
Nicely penned looking forward to read more of your work.






