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[ You play your guitar like ]

You play your guitar like
the woman I want to be,
and I float upon the notes
in a high the strongest chemical
concoction cannot induce.

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  • trustjab
    November 14, 2008
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    that was cute... I wish i could find a chemical that'd make me intoxicating enough to last for days on end... heh if that makes any sense, cus I dont do drugs but yea w/e. Nice poem very well written and I enjoyed reading it, somewhat. I saw a comment on one of my poems so I decided to give one of urs a try.


  • penman gold member
    October 4, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well expressed for a short poem. thank you for sharing.