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waisted emotion

love
isn't worth it
a waisted emotion
that leaves everyone in heart ake
love

Author notes

cinquain i tryed to wright in a form so tell me how i did

A contest entry

any other topics i should try to wright about?

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  • slippingofftheedge
    August 15, 2008
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    kinda empty
    it works for the form
    but i like poems with more depth


    • XxemohatexX
      August 15, 2008
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      thank you for readign my poem i jsut splerged and tryed something new instead of a fre right

  • Tefnut
    August 13, 2008
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    wasted*


  • cherrylollypop
    August 12, 2008
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    i liked it its very poewerful...
    ps. ake is spelled ache ^_^