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Satin Surrender

Missing image







Satin      skin        slip

shrug of shoulder

droop    drape    drop




reasons for surrender

eyes      angst      eagerness

to be flesh you can feel








Author notes

Picture Prompt Credit: http://tattoomaus78.deviantart.com/art/sensuality-54845196

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  • anaisnais
    August 10, 2008
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    Very saucy! Intereting stlye, - enjoyed this ;D


  • toomysterious
    August 9, 2008
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    Very delicately sensual and a delight to read.


  • KayJay
    August 9, 2008

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    Creative and sensual, your use of key words bring forth a montage of images, flickering in our minds, like glimpses through a curtained window... Excellent entry...
    Ken


  • Swan song gold member
    August 9, 2008

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    This is well writeen well thought and very beautiful!!!! You are truly a standdard setter when it comes to poetry!!!!


  • Spiritual Nature
    August 9, 2008

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    Loved your form on this one, it takes you from moment to moment.  Demonstrating for the reader what is happening like a movie.  She beautifully done, sensual but not profane.  Delicate and delightful. Smile

     

    BLESSINGS, Doris


  • Night Hope gold member
    August 8, 2008
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