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Still feeling you

     

I just can’t shake this feeling
Not knowing what to say
Thirty years; you’ve been gone
I think of you each day

I thought that it would pass
Pretending to forget
Each day I’m feeling more remorse
I am tasting my regret

A friend told me I better stop
No sense in crying now
Her words came out so easily
I can’t seem to grasp just how

I cleared you out a while ago
It lasted two whole days
Remembering almost everything
Stuck here in this haze

You’ve touched my life so deeply
I have felt you all these years
There is no way to repay you
This feeling never disappears



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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 24

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    This shows just how deeply you care for her. I think that is a love that has grown, and it is very touching. I hope one day, that love like this can touch us, as our own love grows.

    Love you, my Pirate King.

    Joann