Feeling the earth,
I feel the water,
we understand each other;
we are much alike;
calm and beautiful,
furious and fatal!
Sitting by the sea-shore,
I start our connection once again.
The waves rise with my emotions,
they beat at the rocks.
I close my eyes
and feel the water
come to me,
embracing me
and drawing me in;
We become One!
The Waves rise higher,
elevating me from their depths,
naming me their Queen!
My Waves,
woven beautifully
by my thoughts and feelings,
await a certain young man
to encompass and embrace,
and bring to me.
by: Nada Adel Sobhi
Author notes
I'm going to enter again.. coz i just could not resist this title.. just give me till tonight to enter the other before i travel tom..
if there r any typos let me know.. i typed it here..
A contest entry
- Individual Title Prompts! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
575 points, ended August 26, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Great Write!
An almost awe-inspiring use of the natural to evoke emotion. Very well done. Again, I enjoyed your use of free verse; better here than some of your other work.Keep Writing! Ed -
*sighs* another beautiful piece by you. ironically i can actually see you sitting at the shore making a connection with the sea. I'm sure it would look beautiful your emotions personified.
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we are much alike;
calm and beautiful,
furious and fatal!
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that was my favourite part.
i especially liked the alliteration in the last line.
the imagery is really well written -
I can so relate to this... I feel at one with nature out on the beach or at the shore...it's almost as if nature is whispering it's secrets to you.
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