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august afternoons
as wind chimes sway lazily
worries drift aloft

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  • azure85 gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    august afternoons
    as wind chimes sway lazily
    worries drift aloft

    Very pretty haiku, with the beauty of nature and the cares of this world gone away with the breeze. Thank you for a lovely haiku.


  • malkinpuss
    August 15, 2008
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    Thanks!

    Here in the Northern Hemisphere it is very hot right now. You must be in the southern!


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    August 15, 2008

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    Brr... I don't think I'd be game enough to do that in our August!! It's still snowing here

    Sounds like a great idea though if it was Autumn ^^
    Good luck with your entry
    Claire x


  • secberm
    August 8, 2008

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    Love the imagery. All you need is some lemonade or some ice tea, that long and slow creak from a rocking chair on the porch, and the scent of fresh cut grass... Write on, sister.

    Dez