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Mistress


You stand teasing,
    with satin draped just so.
revealing!
  Even the Dove stops,
      entranced,
as though you beckoned,
it is I who beckons.

Come to me
  on a pedestal
    like classic art,
    I will crown you,
Mistress of my heart.



   

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  • KayJay
    August 9, 2008

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    Michele! What a wonderful write... you captured the essential tease of this and drew wonderful images that stroke the imagination into full flower... Excellent!
    Ken