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urge

just one
one more
one more cut to stop
one last time to reunite

body's shaking
screaming for blood to flow
just one more cut
to finally stop

needy cross my wrist
freedom everywhere
why is it so bad
and why do I need it

fuck it all, why is it so hard to quit cutting?

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  • twistedthought94
    September 15, 2008

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    thats a really good question i found one way that kinda helps not at first but later it helps more wene i was cutting my friends made me snap rubber bands on my wrist wene ever i wanted to cut and after a while i stopped i still want to cut everyday but i just keep the rubber bands on my wrist i helped me maybe it can help u too and love the poem

  • kel
    August 15, 2008

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    I know it's hard to stop. I'm trying as well, once you start ypu can't stop. Good luck with it! keep on fighting!

    ps. awsome poem

  • xbeautifulxdisasterx
    August 15, 2008

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    this is a good poem and i wish it was easy to stop cutting, ive tried and ill do so good then there are those days where its lie you need it. but in the end its not what you should do.its so hard to stop because its like an addiction you become addicted to the rush. im trying to stop and i wish you the best of luck with it.


  • xXdeadXinsideXx
    August 14, 2008

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    Loving the poem and the emotion you put in it. I'm myself getting help to stop cutting but i do wish you the bestest luck that you do stop. Great poem and keep up the good work.


  • black-tears
    August 13, 2008
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    thanks for the comments you guys, this is probably the shortest poem I've ever wrote, so thanks y'all


  • vamapiress
    August 12, 2008
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  • vamapiress
    August 12, 2008
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    great! great! great!

  • know one
    August 11, 2008

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    wow

    This says alot for such a short poem,sorry to hear of your troubles,I wish you strenght.great write!

  • xXshes emoxX
    August 10, 2008
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    omg that's so great

  • imissyou
    August 9, 2008
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    *****

    sounds exactly like whats happening with me x

  • Zannah
    August 8, 2008

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    Great write. Qutting is hard because it becomes apart of who you are and its just a need. you crave it when its gone. stay strong

    Zannah

  • Husky18
    August 8, 2008
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    because it becomes part of your/my lifestyle. i dont know about you, but its how i survive

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