Darkness,
Entrenched in my soul
Sorrow,
Surrounds me like a wall
Agony,
Inflames with every crawl
Turmoil,
A storm I cant recall
Anger,
A spec in my light
Anguish,
For nothing is now right
Torment,
Distorting my sight
Dissent,
My mind is in plight
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Terror,
For what I will now be
Pity,
For those who foresee
Fury,
My pain is now free
Death,
I am coming now for thee
Author notes
Wrote this before I saw your contest but thought you may find this to your liking. Not really looking to compete but I would like to hear your thoughts. Be well. 
A contest entry
- Walking into the Darkness! by vampireblood.
300 points, ended September 21, 2008, 66 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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After reading this, it's an instant favorite!
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Wow, this is AMAZING!! I love the topic, the wording- so beautiful! Great job
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So sad and depressed yet the words you chose were so strong, very good rythems, I enjoyed it and can relate to it a little.
Very nice write.
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Death
I am coming now for thee
Those were my favorite lines in the write. Good luck in the contest!
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very dark
this poem is dark and yet the words are so powerful.
(See Lines 1-8.)
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I actually really like this. I can really relate to this as well. Your set up of the poem was pretty awesome to. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in my contest.
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I am glad this meant something to you. Thank you for taking the time to comment
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