Graciously she disrobes
on the plinth for all to see
beauty is for everyone
but the pleasure
that follows
is only for
me
A contest entry
- PIF – Semi-Quickie; Sensuality (Picture Prompt) by KayJay.
700 points, ended August 9, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Mr. Hogarth was definitely correct.
Succinct. Stands on a pedastal. perhaps, you could have included the dove...
Lots left on the table...
just a thought. -
Lovely! Someone who understand sensuality... the suggestiveness is deftly done, leaving the reader to imagine... Great write.
Ken
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Ooo nice!! So it's ok to be an exhibitionist as long as you save the rest for your man??
hehe
This is actually really beautiful.. sensual and tasteful!
I'm glad I didn't enter this as I would have simply ruined that lovely picture with smut! lol
Good luck!
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ahhh! lol. I feel like a naughty child reading this
mwahhaha, you wrote free verse
...I wonder if you did for that lavendar picture..... 
I love that the form of the poem resembles the plinth she is standing on!
~Meg
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The Golden Boffo!
Love it to pieces.
Her, too.
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Well done here and in free verse im sure this will hitheart strings.
And as always disrobing for pleasure afterwards is a treat.
Lucky some
Love you
Passions
Good luck to you..
**Waves to KayJay** -
Nicely concrete, emphasising the point of the poem.
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