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more than this

this is more than just a slice
in your willing arms

this is more than just a tear
in your welling eyes

this is more than just that power
you feel when you see the crimson flow

this is more than wondering
how you would end your miserable life

this is more than the ambulance
driving you from home

this is more than the stitches on your wrists
exposing your dark dark secret to the world

this is your family, your friends, your life
enough meaning to survive?

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  • ley527
    August 13, 2008

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    This reminds me so much of myself when i was about 17. It's a very powerful, very well written peice

  • Zannah
    August 8, 2008

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    Great write, short and to the point but passioet and just. Life it so totally worth living when i get to be around the people i love most. Great job again

    Zannah


  • Mrs. Serial Killa
    August 8, 2008
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    Wow this is powerful! great work!