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Writing Poetry



As an adult, I play kick the can, with my muse inside it.


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  • crivanea silver member
    August 21, 2008

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    lol..its soo cute!!very creative!.,.and i love the background..as a child i never play kick the can so i have to try it as an adult..


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    play with words like toys

    come up with wonderful poems or one crushed ego as I do so well, you go my friend play and create, good luck
    Linda


  • Nicolette gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    you got to keep the child inside alive...playing with cans or words...you do it well, my friend.

    ~ Nicolette


    • Malabu
      August 22, 2008
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      ill never grow up...perhaps it's why i cant write poems like you lol


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    flowing back and forth trying to make sense of it, this is my favorite part of writing.
    it is like a painter who never knows what they have created until their finished.
    wonderful write
    God bless...

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