a lush green overhang romances the
mind while the thick heat of summer
drenches the day
a solitary bee longs to fill his sense
of purpose with prim, white flowers
and the sounds of mindless work which
languish all the while
Author notes
picture prompt: (click to view)
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2416/865.jpg?1218159018
"Summer" by cyzeal from deviantart.com
41 words
A contest entry
- Summer Suspended by Gypsie Ink.
300 points, ended August 9, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow. Beautiful imagery and I dont even like heat and humidity. You make it sound beautiful. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Mike
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Nice!
A wonderful write. Lethargic and soft. Thank you for your entry and best of luck in my contest. -
Hand in hand picture with poem. So true; a picture is worth a thousand words. Great expressions in description.
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