She sips on coffee
exotic and black,
savorying melodies of
night passion dark as
ebony skies.
Remembering lips pressed
together cold and wet,
tingling in ecstasy.
As we mixed java flavored
love all night long in
the rhapsody of romance,
leaving her all cozy
and jubilant as a morning
sunrise.
Author notes
See poem inspiration photo by
clicking on link below.
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2416829
A contest entry
- black coffee in bed by Saffron.
1000 points, ended August 24, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for entering this creative piece in the contest
Saffron
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Hmmm, I'm feeling this piece here
Good luck, stopping by to show some support and love 
ephiphany
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Quite simply....I loved this...just because I did.
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Dear Unknown-reality
lol! no silly girl.
if you pay attention you will see that I started the first stanza with BLACK.
A good poet tries not to use the same words over and over.
you're a nut.
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you afraid to say black?
black skies.
savoring melodies of
passion, black as night.
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I think your getting my point here, are you?
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Moqui likes ... oh yeah ... hand grenade over the fence ... and last line last line last line works the same way a flower opens in the first hot light of the day but in a nice shady spot with pretty spackled lit spots
... i wish i had written this .... ahh ... i will pretend that i did
good work, my brother
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i see you carefully used the right sentemental words for this contest piece here very spicy and zesty in deep breathe romance i rathered enjoyed this quite a lot good luck to you hon in the contest jewels
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Wonderful
Very creative and well done. So a terrific write. Best of luck in the contest.
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