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Love's full thrust

"Sometimes we love someone so much
we must be numb to it
fore if we truly felt
how much we love that person
it would kill us."

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  • PureCountry
    August 8, 2008

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    A Powerful Thought,

    indeed. Your words speak mightily of the strength of love to one's soul. A strength that only the carrier of said love can ever understand. For can one truly comprehend love as seen or felt by another?

    Best of Luck

    Niash

    Silent Hawk

    Postscript: 3rd line, is fore it supposed to be fore if?