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Thank You

I trust you,
and you trust me.
then why cant this be?

Theres sumthing underneath.
I know u can feel it to
or maybe its just the alcohol
tellen me sumthen I wish I already knew.

I dnt luv u,I know that for sure
but theres sumthen bout you
that keeps me comen back for more.

You make me feel so confused
my mind and heart feels so twisted.
But I know your always there.
with your smile, you'll always listen.

Thank You.


Author notes

Wrote this when I was drinken.Bout someone I talk to on msn.
You know who you are.
Thanks.

**dnt know if it finished it.,will come back when sober**

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  • Your Darkness
    August 19, 2008
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    Loved it.


  • light to a dreamer gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    I love the poem just look at your last two lines I wouldn't put (always be there )I would take out (be) but thats just me. Good work hope to read more soon from you.