I hold a warped, broken wooden pail,
drained by sin, having sucked it dry;
where shall I go but to salvation's well,
for until that Day, it shall not run dry.
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875 points, ended August 23, 2008, 19 entries
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Nice write, very profound and inspiring.
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It is said
The truth will set one free...mac -
It is said
The truth will set one free...mac
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Excellent Message,
is contained within these four brief lines. Yes I concur Salvation's Well shall never run dry.
Wonderfully Done and Aptly Said
Best of Luck
Niaish
Silent Hawk
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Just a few to many words in the first line that make it stumble but over all I like the poem and wish you luck. I would take out wooden but thats just me.
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