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For Love of Sue

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My love she called me in the rain
As we sang our duet
She knows I want to take her pain
My love she calls her pet.

I feel the grasp on the chain pull
And drop upon my knees
My eyes of grey look up in full
And whisper 'Mistress please' .

I feel your hurt and start to cry
I want to make you smile.
Your pet will fight the demon's lie
Or walk the burning mile.

My love she called me in the rain
As we sang our duet
She knows I want to take her pain
My love she calls her pet.

I trust your hand when you give pain
Now let me take on yours.
And through me let the feelings drain
My love open heart's doors.

I am your possession, my love
And to your feet I fall.
Your tears that strike me hard, my love
Please know you are my all.

My love she called me in the rain
As we sang our duet
She knows I want to take her pain
My love she calls her pet.

You are my strength when times are bad
And now let me be thine
Please trust my heart when you are sad
With you we both can shine.

Let sorrow go to ground and fade
As we reach for the skies
The pain is ours, by you I've stayed
My love of Sue in eyes.

My love she called me in the rain
As we sang our duet
She knows I want to take her pain
My love she calls her pet.


 

Author notes

I know I am in the crap for this but hey bet ya smiled Sis

 

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Thank you Sis, I know your words are so true and you would take my pain if you could. Your words really made me smile and sharing a cup of tea and a biccie is almost as good
    Congratulations on the HM, I know it's not much and special thanks to Jade for cheering me up by running the contest.
    Love
    Suz
    xxx


  • The Poetic Angel
    August 8, 2008

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    lmao Nice One

    a Subbie's love lol this will deffo cheer Sue up

    awsome border and picture



    xxx Your angel xxx

    angel inkwell