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Cleansing Rain (silver)

As rain falls on drought ridden land outside
I give thanks as the earth drinks life's essence
A purifying heart these drops provide
And moon sheds a glow of luminescence.

Feeling gentle droplets upon my face
My arms reach out to embrace this blessing
I spin within this gift of God's grace
This shower of hope my soul caressing.

Dawn displays pictures of nature serene
Water flows in streamlets across the land
All around that was dust now shimmers clean
Nature that was dying now looks so grand.

Rain has a way to revive faith in all
And from beneath barren earth new life crawls.

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English Sonnet
Prompt - Rain

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  • penman gold member
    August 10, 2008
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    Excellent

    Oh my you are sure doing great with the sonnet. Wonderful job. Best of luck in the contest.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    awwww this is absoultly beautiful
    lovely form and then the wording just whisks you away. good luck in the contest and take care
    Stephanie ♥