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haku

tintagel

the sun

waves blowing

the wind

A contest entry

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    December 8, 2008
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    Simple and beautiful. Great job.
    Thanks for entering; good luck.
    Brian


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Wow what a lovely write ..
    I have yet to try this style of poetry
    Best wishes and I think you have done a wonderful poem
    Julie x


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 9, 2008

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    awww, this is wonderful, you are really smart
    your mom told me about this haiku, just had to read it, and it was worth it
    keep writitng and take care
    Stephanie ♥


  • maralisa silver member
    August 8, 2008
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    wow alisa my darling daughter this is a beautiful haiku love you lots

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    August 8, 2008
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    Awww this is nice; so lovely.
    Thanks for sharing it.
    Brian

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