BERRY & WROTT - UNDERTAKERS.
" Put your chest in our chest and lay peacefully at rest "
A contest entry
- The Perfect Coffin For Hollywood Women! 20 poets/BIG POINTS! by imahealer.
1900 points, ended August 22, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow this is short and sweet and very direct
Well done loved it
Julie
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Right to the point! Very clever!
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Must agree with imahealer. Though the contest does ask for an approximately 30-second ad, this is a great piece- perhaps a slogan? Love the name, and the double use of "chest". You fit a surprising amount of imagination into a one-line ad. Great job.
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Seeing you sketching in your author's photo, I can tell you know how to write a great ad. First of all, the title is a funny play on words. Bet you never thought anyone would notice that! (Do we really have to rot?) Can't your service find a way of preserving what all the perverts loved to touch and fiddle with?
Your logo line could not have been written with more panache. Sometimes fewer words create curiosity, especially with the name of your Mortuary. Thank you so very much for your ad. You are marvelous with puns!
Linda
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I like it short and to the point. Good Luck
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