I lay myself almost too carefully
into the heart of a hay field.
Freshly cut and alive.
I'm over whelmed
with a mixture of pain and pleasure.
Staring into the sky
you send me through the clouds
almost too high.
It's the first time you've touched me
that I really believed you love me.
and you love in a way
that makes it okay
for me to...
wake up in the morning
You love me in a way that
makes me feel like loving myself.
you lay me in the clouds
sweet sunset tears
and I know I'm alive.
I know I'm in love.
Author notes
"I read the rules"
A contest entry
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Comments
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Wonderful poem! Just to start I'd like to thank you for reading and following the rules! Thanks for sharing this entry. It was filled with love and flowed beautifully. Spectacular write! Best of luck!
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Here we are again...this is great.But if we keep meeting like this people are going to talk.Touching and poignant.
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Aww this was so beautiful, with lovely imagery and deep thoughts of love.
Amazing write!
Thank you for entering & best of luck
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To feel in love
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