Strawberry fields forever
I sing under the breath
of an unborn child.
Somebody to love me as I will always love them...
My young heart throbs.
I can't wait to be the mother
I never had..
I can't wait to bring life into this world.
I want to hold you, my unborn child.
I want to wrap you in my arms and love you
like only a mother can love.
I want you to be better than I.
I want to see you grow old.
I want to know that your mine.
and sing you soft to sleep
strawberry fields of forever.
A contest entry
- Pregnancy/Babies! by Shadow-Addict.
450 points, ended October 10, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Maternity by SeaWithYourHeart.
700 points, ended November 18, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What Do You Think?
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thats chocked full of emotion and its absolutely fantastic! be proud of this write it is better to be genuine becasue only good poetry can be found from someting real
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Wow - i can really relate to this! This is totally how I feel about my unborn child. You really captured the love of a mother to her child perfectly... Thank you very much for entering this huni and good luck xx
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It's real.
I know you didn't want pre-writes but I thought it'd fit perfectly. I wrote this because I was sad...seeing all these pregnant woman around me, when I want more than anything to bring life into this world..weather that scares my boyfriend or not lol.. He says not till I'm done with college and have a good job.. =/ I wish you the best with your baby. And hold him like he's your everything. Because..he will be.
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Ummm, almost got a tear out of me, this one
Thats all i'll say
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awww, your a softy!
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