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The End

And alas the sun will set,
on a love that never was,
in a world that never really existed,
where even this setting sun is false.

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  • crivanea silver member
    August 21, 2008
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    sounds like shakespeare...lol..nice job..and i like the imagery..good line..and thnx for entering


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    August 14, 2008

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    Wow, the flow in this simply awesome. I really liked the lines... I'm not sure why but I'm drawn to it

    Good luck with your entry ^^
    Claire x


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    this is awesome, i love your word usage. and the idea with the write. good luck and take care
    Stephanie ♥