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The Lost Portal

In a field of wild flowers,
Where I like to run and play
They lies and untold mystery
No one knows to this day

There is a small clearing
Sunken into the earth
Against a flat wall lies a door
No one knowing its true worth

A plain stone archway
With a green wooden door
A simple latch with no lock
Leaves me wanting to know more

Curiosity killed the cat
Or so I have been told
But there will only be one way
For this mystery to unfold

Summing up all my courage
I take the latch in my hand
And pray to the spirits
That the prize might be grand


Life Unknown
Alexander

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  • Jasmine Rayne
    August 17, 2008
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    Nice write. I like the story told throughout the poem. :]

    "A plain stone archway
    With a green wooden door
    A simple latch with no lock
    Leaves me wanting to know more"

    I can feel the curiosity pulsing through me! What's beyond that door? Great wite. Loved the imagery. Thanks for entering.







    -Lily♥