My soul fled the day you died;
Goodbye.
A contest entry
- Sentence by crivanea.
300 points, ended August 21, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
^_^
I like this! -
too cliche...but i like it though..nice job..u got potential..thnx for entering
-
*shivers slightly*
Kinda un-nerving this.... beautiful and gorgeous however though with that said
So well done for so few words
I hope you do well with your entry ^^
Claire x -
Wow... I was stunned by the brevity... But it's powerful words - maybe just for me specifically. It works. Beautifully.
-
Aw - almost speechless, I can certainly relate to this. God knows what I'd do without the Man to inspire me. This is so, so sad and so, so true. Nice change of tone in the finality of Goodbye. Good luck in your contest.
-
this was a very haunting write, but very well done, and i like the coldness of goodbye
good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
