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Body and Soul

As my mind expresses beauty it makes poetry,for my feet to express beauty,they just dance.

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  • crivanea silver member
    August 21, 2008

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    lol..makes sense..body and soul..wonder why its the feet..y not the eyes..ur mind express beauty..but ur fingers type it out..

  • bowmore bill
    August 14, 2008
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    Great.

    Dance on Elfin, may your feet always be happy.


  • myrataal silver member
    August 14, 2008

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    Ah I loved this, Poetess!

    I can tell when dances are poetic motion of beauty ...

    and also when poetry reflects a beautiful mind!


    Love
    Myra


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    August 14, 2008

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    Ok, I now have a new favourite in this contest. This definitely it

    Simply gorgeous and true too.

    Good luck with your entry ^^
    Claire x


  • firefly53633
    August 12, 2008
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    YES!!!!!

    Beautifully penned! I love it! Tell me More


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 9, 2008
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    nice, i mean that nice, i like this poem right here, i know i haven't talked to you in a while but i hope to change that, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    awww i like this alot. its beatiful, and made me smile
    good luck in the contest and take care
    Stephanie ♥

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