Just hold me for a little while
Please don't look away
Sit down here, right next to me
And take me in your arms
You're all I want to know and feel
Let's just drift away
We'll go someplace we're free and loved
I'll take you there with me
Just hold me for a little while
That's all I ask of you
A simple touch to draw me near
And nothing else, I swear
I wish you'd look into my eyes
And kiss me 'til I'm high
But hold me for a little while
And I will be just fine.
Author notes
Musings on unrequited desire and loneliness. Kind of what being homosexual is all about.
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Aw, that's sad, and yet very sweet. But there's hope in there too, because there's always hope. I don't agree with the comment that said it feels unfinished. Haha I just realized that the previous comment disagrees too. ^_^
Great write sis!
-Dlvvanzor
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Awww...a nice poem with good rhythm, and a thought-provoking topic. I disagree with lammert; it does seem complete and draws to a fulfilling conclusion. Great write, as usual, Hannah. ^_^
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its a good poem with an enlightening topic,however, i think that u didnt finish it;did the person eventually draw near?etc..its rather incomplete,but very good.
please complete it.
checkout some of my poems -
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It is complete, or as complete as it's gonna get. You're treating it like a story, which if it was, I would have finished. But it's not a story, it's just musings. Kind of a from the heart type thing. Thanks for the advice anyway, I'm glad you read and liked it.
I'd be glad to check out some of your work!
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