Taking one final look, I gently close my eyes, to dream for the last time, as my breath leaves with a sigh.
A contest entry
- Sentence by crivanea.
300 points, ended August 21, 2008, 32 entries
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good one sentence..strong..sounds like the end of novel..a romance novel..w/ a sad ending..nice write..good luck in the contest
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I don't know why but I just seemed to sigh at that very moment I read it
What a beautiful write ^^
Good luck with your entry
Claire x
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aww this just makes you want to sigh, its so beautiful, wonderful job and good luck in the contest.
take care
Stephanie ♥ -
sigh
that is a sigh, one final look back
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Thank you, my best wishes always.
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