Love is what glows inside you after someone says, "Good job!"
A contest entry
- Sentence by crivanea.
300 points, ended August 21, 2008, 32 entries
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so sweet...i expected something different..but hey..good job is also good..lol
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Awww I love that feeling. Wish I had it today actually... cept my teacher sorta did the opposite
Ah well, very good line
Good luck!
Claire x -
awww, love is so sweet, and reading this ic ould feel that feeling. which is wonderful, lovely job and good luck
Stephanie ♥ -
a good poem penned, ah love, it is many things - What is the meaning of love? Is it caring for another with passion? Is it the art of reproduction? I guess it is both these things and much, much more. We can love our cars, but perhaps we love them to a lesser degree than we love our husband or wife, or our parents or children. Though I have known some people who have spent their whole lives underneath a car, so maybe some people do actually love their cars more than people.I think love is connection. What I mean by this is we have bonds in our lives that are strong, we nurture these bonds with care and enthusiasm, and spend a lot of our time giving so others can smile and feel safe and secure in the world, whether it is by love-making or simple acts of kindness. We love cornflakes, well some of us do. That is a form of connection too, for we connect with what pleases us and try to live life in those zones of pleasure. We love to share what pleases us with others too in the hope that they might love the same things as we do. Is love good or bad? Well I guess it is a little of both, it can be bad for it could and often does break people’s hearts, but it is good because that is a learning experience, if we did not experience the darker shades of love then how would we ever appreciate the highs when they arrive. good job lol
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