Why sleep in fear
that tomorrow will come
and separate you from
those that you cherish the most?
At Double D Eternity
we cater to every spouse's desire and plea,
making sure those two love ones
you hold so precious in your eyes,
will not be apart for long
from your affectionate hands.
Carefully guarding their safety
in our elegant chamber of perfect security,
thoughtfully crafted as a wooden masterpiece,
which you will be proud to keep in your home,
with dual childproof lids
so you will never have to fear losing touch
while keeping younger fingers away.
Because we understand
how important it is
to not be denied contact with the ones
you hold so dear.
A contest entry
- The Perfect Coffin For Hollywood Women! 20 poets/BIG POINTS! by imahealer.
1900 points, ended August 22, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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LOL!!! This is an awesome response to the prompt. I just love it. Best of luck in the contest. I think you have a winner!
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Us men surely do hold them dear!
Best to keep the children away from them. Great fun to read.
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Double D Eternity- amazing! I also like the part about touching while not letting the kids touch. "The ones you hold so dear"- You are in serious contention for a top prize, penman. Great job.
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"Double D Eternity" Now that's a very catchy name for a Mortuary! Can of a tongue twister! I absolutely loved how you managed to include the young women passing on, and their spouses wanting to view the boobs they once suckled and cherished. Great idea for keeping the kids at bay! If one has a daughter with tiny breasts, one day she might question the huge mounds on Mom's coffin!
(You need to do a re-read as I found a couple of places where you would never have missed these typos)
Every ad person, could potentially be this for a career, along with being a poet! I am having such a wonderful time reading each one!
Thank you for your ad to preserve our precious mammary glands!
Linda
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Why not flaunt your perfect 36's or 40's after death,
perhaps build a waist and hip curves into the coffin as well, that lets old men drool and dream at funerals, young men realize what there is in this world to die for, and married men cherish the still living bust of thier own coffers at home...Great write~~Artis -
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married men still look! If they are married to a flat chested woman, they secretly drool over those handfuls of pillows to rest their weary heads on! LOL
I like your idea of flaunting tiny waists and hip curves too! Maybe in your ad, your can make some adjustments for those qualities, too! hehe
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Aww another wonderful poem / ad
True we all hold close to heart our lost loved one..
what a way this would be with that image
Best wishes
Julie
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