You’re my ribbon in the sky, the apple of my eye
My one true love, you stay down to ride
If I say I’m hungry, you make me a sandwich
If you say you’re hungry then we’ll share that sandwich
I’m all about you and you’re all about me
you have my back and you’re not afraid to let the world see
Divided we might fall but together we’re unstoppable
You stood by my side even when the lights were inoperable
You didn’t point fingers; we just stuck to our grind
Our love unlocked treasures that we never thought to find
Like compassion, strength, and the ability to compromise
We began to open up each other and see what’s really inside
We’re both ruggish and have thuggish tendencies
But we realized that we’re one another’s remedies
The love we share is simply the best
I’m happily locked down on house arrest
With you, my baby
I love you to death
A contest entry
- Show Me Your M-E-T-H-O-D, Man by secberm.
1000 points, ended August 23, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Loved this one
Good luck poet in our contest.
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I liked this! Very down to earth romance here. I especially liked "We’re both ruggish and have thuggish tendencies
But we realized that we’re one another’s remedies"
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Well done, bro. This is definately you're method. Thanks for entering and good luck. Write on. One.
Dez
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Thank you for your comments bro. They mean a lot to me. I hope your contest goes well. Much love bro.
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I’m all about you and you’re all about me
you have my back and you’re not afraid to let the world see
That is beautiful. The warmth from this poem is tangible.
Best of luck in the contest!
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Thank you for such great compliments on my work. They inspire me to do more. Thank you again.
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outstanding
this is sure to net you a shiny!.. I'm very impressed my brother, and loved this write!
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YaY..shows a strong love.
loved the idea of sharing sandwiches lol.It is like a symbol of how lovers share the good and the bad together.
"Divided we might fall but together we’re unstoppable" this one was fantastic..so strong that nobody can stop this love.
After finding those treasures,I think you both became the richest(lolz).
Very nice poem.
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thank you for reading. i'm glad you liked it. much love to you.
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She is one lucky lady, Maurice. You write it from the heart, I can feel it. Love, Laney
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thank you for your continued support. I truely value it. much love and many blessings to you.
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