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It's hard to understand.

I woke up my with my nose in a vulture’s face,
they’d left me for dead...

I started lick’en cause I know what death wants!
You were born because your mother was fecundity,
back then,
they tried real hard to make death look like birth.
but we’re open for suggestion;

Death and birth
are mothers and vultures
going round and round
about a tail.

How do we make people
that don’t understand
feel better?

Please tell me what you think

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  • Sver
    August 26, 2008

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    This poem made me think. It was deep and true. You write in a style I'm not very familiar with but I think it's well written. Thanks for commenting.