happiness is yummy
its the cookie we shared
dipped in milky giggles
happiness is addictive
like chocolate ecstasy and
horse back riding,
that gentle adrenaline
Happiness is not sold in stores
its pricelessly expensive,
and damn slippery
Happiness is yummy
and so much of the world is starving
if only they knew how bake.
Author notes
i made up the word 
ricelessly
A contest entry
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Comments
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Oh what a lovely write.
Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest & good luck -
nice write
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Oh yeah I love happy poems!!! Cookies are pretty amazing too. However the piece didnt have much of a flow to it...but it made me smile and I enjoyed reading it. Good Job
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Cookie. I am hungry now
A good write, sweet and happy and filled with warmth!
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I Find Many Thoughts,
which individually considered would be sufficient to quote. When crafted as a whole, it seems to lose of the appeal though.
However be not discouraged, I am very open-minded in my judging. LOL
Best of Luck
Niaish
Silent Hawk
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hehehe
I REALLY like this
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