Bachelor party? bachelor party?
What are you talking about?
Didn't us girls mention
That you boys are not allowed out?.
Good heavens above Dark1
You really must learn the new rules!!
Us girls will be the ones
To occupy all the bar stools.
No no you have it wrong
You must get used to your new life
No more going out for you Mr.
You stay in for your modern wife.
But if you're really good
(by good we mean a perfect man)
Then we MAY just let you celebrate
with one or two beer cans.
But don't go overboard with it
Bedtime is nice and early for you
Cause all us girls insist
You look your best when you say "I do"
Author notes
hehehehehehehe!!
Written January 13th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- DARKs bachelor party by theDARK1.
305 points, ended January 18, 2004, 5 entries
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i did enjoy this! definitely was amusing. i guess itz still a bachelor party...celebrating being a bachelor! i do wish the former bride to be the best. somehow, i think she will bounce back from the heartbreak i had caused her and move on to better things. thank you for entering.
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YYEEEEEEEEHHAAAAAAAAA, I love it, I have to ask, the Love of my life, my little peach, a petal of unrivalled perfume,--the woman i live wiv, permission if I can go out. The only prob with that is she's never home to ask, she's always at a party or somethin..hehehahahohoh...this was a different look at the bucks party, but since he aint gettin hitched now, we'll turn it into a "I'm single and do what I wan't party". see ya there DARK. lol..fs
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hahaha
Over the many years I have done 2 of these. First one very drunk but a few days before the wedding to have time to recover. The second, a quiet dinner with close friends.
Love to see the changing times. Nicely written.
John
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