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Beauty with such grace,
ethereal.

Of unknown provenance,
celestial.

Her feet started to walk,
I was entranced,
How she waltz and glide like the swan.

I was about to ask her name,
but then she trips,
oh poor lady...

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I entered this contest of not knowing what the prompt is, so when it appeared, I was thinking weird things and something humorous...
and I hope that it humor you a bit...

A contest entry

Make me Cry. ... One way or another

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  • OnceUponAMind
    August 11, 2008

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    Hehe, yes, I totaly understand - I know the picture is a bit off beat, but you did a nice job Thanks for entering (and sorry it's taken so long to judge being a quickie and all...)

    Amber


  • fairytalelovestory
    August 7, 2008
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    i especially liked the lines Of unknown provenance,
    celestial.
    good luck


  • delightfulmess silver member
    August 7, 2008

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    hehe.... Nice take on the prompt.
    I found this refreshing.

    Best of luck in the contest.


    Delila