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Forever And Always

I wish you were here
I wish you were close
and those are the times that I'm wishing the most.

I gave you that ring you wear on your hand
and like time in an hour glass, you slip away like sand.

I want you so bad to hold, and to touch
and that is because I love you so much.

And I want you to know whatever you do
I will always be here

and I will love you forever and always.

Author notes

Hi, my name is Stephanie I'm 17 years old and I wil be leaving for college soon and I recently broke up with my boyfrfiend.

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yah true story

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  • trista gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    Hello there

    Awwww....break-ups are so hard on a person... I'm really sorry to hear that. Moving on to college should be a good way to keep busy and your mind occupied...and in my experience, that definitely helps.

    Although your poem is short, I enjoyed it none the less. I do wish it, or your author note, gave me a little more information about the theme of the contest though.

    Thanks so much for sharing your talents in the contest, and good luck to you.

    Best wishes,
    ~J.